何志毅的回答：

With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need. Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly. However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

潘刚的回答：

With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers, shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life. Here consumers can buy almost everything they need. Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience. People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like. This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person. The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet. All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses. The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly. However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages. The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally. Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer. The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered. They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you. Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.

不美的惊喜的回答：

dear mr.john brown,

i （①退四格）am the sales manager wang xx,（②省略了i am,显得语法纯熟）writing to you to inform you that the goods (这个句子比较复杂，首先是一个to 的目的状语从句，然后是一个that 引导的宾语从句，最后是一个省略了引导词that的定语从句)you booked on the internet is on the way to you,and it is considered to arrive in a week.

thank you for ordering（此处不再用book，避免重复，显得词汇量小） the newest products of our company.it is real a glory of us to provide you with these goods（奉承句，让人看了心理舒服）.we hope you will be satisfied with（记住这个固定的短语） it.your satisfaction is the greatest honor of us（非常经典的表达，您的满意是我们最大的荣幸）.

please anwer it once you receive the letter.anything confused ,just drop me a line ,or give me a phonecall,we will do our utmost to serve you .

hoping to be your permanent partner on business.thank you!

                                             yours`sincerely

                                      june 19^th,2011

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